Very nice - especially the period styled ones (Y) I'm not qualified to talk about editing to any particular standard, so I won't, but if you're looking for TFP on here then make sure you know what it is that models want, which might include highly polished finished images.
As Orson said, there's repetition which could be culled - I try to limit myself to just one per set, regardless of how many the model might have wanted, though my recent use of triptychs and other montages side-steps that self-imposed rule :)
On albums, you'll find that I love them. I use my main portfolio for recent images, and put everything into themed albums - quite often into multiple albums because they fit multiple themes (e.g. nude, mono, abroad). The choice of them is entirely personal, and as Orson says they get few views, but not zero. I use them - in conjunction with keyword tags - as a way to find and show a subset of images to a model I might be in conversation with, such as a mood board, or at least as a convenient way to find the subset that I want to show them. Other people use them in different ways.
