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That all looks good to me, well laid out and very readable.  Just one minor niggle, you may want to edit the sentence "I charge very fairly to travel as per the aa Petrol calculator which is fair"?

Has anyone told you your avatar looks like Tina Turner?  :-)

Gothic Image said

That all looks good to me, well laid out and very readable.  Just one minor niggle, you may want to edit the sentence "I charge very fairly to travel as per the aa Petrol calculator which is fair"?

Has anyone told you your avatar looks like Tina Turner?  :-)

Ah thanks looks like I didn't finish my sentence 

and Thank you thats a huge compliment I get that a lot although my heritage is scottish and ginger, my whole family are pale red heads and Im very tanned with dark features and green eyes...maybe theres something I should ask my mum lol

Amended those notes and added a little extra in about tours , my home and my lighting set ups 

" ... each drive is accurate priced"?  Sorry to niggle!

Gothic Image said

" ... each drive is accurate priced"?  Sorry to niggle!

AH sorry I'm typing too fast with long nails! I'll re amend

:-)

I would try and condense it a bit more and bullet point some areas, for example your lighting equipment

I’m not sure if your car being a convertible is relevant. Or mentioning a clean licence, I’m sure a photographer wouldn’t be put off booking you if you had three points for speeding ?!?

I guess by Stating you drive and mileage is charged accordingly at 40per mile ( or whatever rate your using) would keep the reader interested

Kerry,

You've not included any of my photos. Perhaps they don't fit with your image but they do portray a real you. Im not really concerned , so do what you like but I would hope to have another shoot with you next year. Take care, happy Christmas! 

dave band said

Kerry,

You've not included any of my photos. Perhaps they don't fit with your image but they do portray a real you. Im not really concerned , so do what you like but I would hope to have another shoot with you next year. Take care, happy Christmas! 

dave band said

Kerry,

You've not included any of my photos. Perhaps they don't fit with your image but they do portray a real you. Im not really concerned , so do what you like but I would hope to have another shoot with you next year. Take care, happy Christmas! 

Hi Dave

I thought I had put them up My bad, they are however up on my bedroom wall all beautifully framed in print! I'll upload them this week x

dave band said

Kerry,

You've not included any of my photos. Perhaps they don't fit with your image but they do portray a real you. Im not really concerned , so do what you like but I would hope to have another shoot with you next year. Take care, happy Christmas! 

In fact just looked there are 2 from our shoot Dave about halfway down my port, 2 of the beach shots :)

Sarah75 said

I would try and condense it a bit more and bullet point some areas, for example your lighting equipment

I’m not sure if your car being a convertible is relevant. Or mentioning a clean licence, I’m sure a photographer wouldn’t be put off booking you if you had three points for speeding ?!?

I guess by Stating you drive and mileage is charged accordingly at 40per mile ( or whatever rate your using) would keep the reader interested

Sarah75 said

I would try and condense it a bit more and bullet point some areas, for example your lighting equipment

I’m not sure if your car being a convertible is relevant. Or mentioning a clean licence, I’m sure a photographer wouldn’t be put off booking you if you had three points for speeding ?!?

I guess by Stating you drive and mileage is charged accordingly at 40per mile ( or whatever rate your using) would keep the reader interested

I guess thats from my previous job in travel where a clean licence was essential, probably a habit i just tend to say it now and also on my CV , I mention the convertible as it's pretty cool to shoot in especially during the summer as I have done a lot of work on it so it's something else people may want to shoot, as a photographer also I've got tons of ideas for it next summer :) 

I've always used the AA calculator as it gives a fair price before the journey so I usually fill up at my local station which is far cheaper than motorway services. Maybe I'm too precise but that's just me, I cover everything pre shoot, thanks for the feedback though, I hope my notes keep potential photographers interested but I tend to type as I speak, half scottish half scouse with my heart on my sleeve :)

Cheers guys feedback is appreciated